Unfurnished

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  1. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 9, 2026 at 7:32 AM

    I especially like that window to another view, and a door. Smiles. Other possibilities.

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  2. Sumana RoyJuly 9, 2026 at 9:41 AM

    Some amazing imagery for 'yearning for love withheld'! I also love that window and the door.

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  3. SusanJuly 9, 2026 at 9:53 AM

    This is an extended metaphor that works right through the other view and door. Bravo!

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  4. MarjaJuly 9, 2026 at 5:48 PM

    I enjoyed that It makes you feel the emptyness of it clearly Great analogy and images

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  5. Susie ClevengerJuly 10, 2026 at 8:02 AM

    I can feel the yearning emptiness of love withheld.

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  6. Jennifer WagnerJuly 10, 2026 at 1:37 PM

    Yes, the door is there, and perfectly placed in your poem.

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  7. Jae RoseJuly 10, 2026 at 7:25 PM

    A thoughtful and reflective poem which really conveys a sense of emptiness - Jae

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  8. purplepeninportland.comJuly 15, 2026 at 5:59 PM

    This tugs at the heart. Beautiful photo of door and window

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